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Nikerlz
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0 posted 2006-09-05 12:04 PM


The heavy weight of truth
Vertigo
Like the magnet that pulls all matter central
Were never alone in the end
We join at the center again

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Neotec
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1 posted 2006-09-05 12:44 PM


good one kind of like the "Magnet" part

Dublin Boy
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2 posted 2006-09-05 02:26 AM


A nice little piece of cosmic musing--I enjoyed this.
Cheers,
Bill

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-09-05 07:23 AM


Nikerlz
It seems that's what chaos does. Enjoyed

deleeme
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4 posted 2006-09-05 07:56 AM


An interesting philosophy you pose here.
That heavy weight of truth both grounds us and calls us together in centrality--I can go along with that.

Interesting muse,
  David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

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5 posted 2006-09-27 09:24 AM


You have a good eye, an excellent eye for what isn't obvious.....and that's the best tool a poet has.

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6 posted 2006-09-27 10:45 AM


yep

good one!

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