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she plays the coquette (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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he totes that dress home
in a paper poke  
she coos
poke rattles in her hands    
sunshine yellow  
buttons for undoing  
twirlin’ skirt  
charcoal man knows what she likes  
  somethin’ more bebette      
lady squeals  
bauble  
for her neck

she leans in front of him
fasten it for me
I can’t get it to do  

he does her up
arm around waist
chuckle lips on hers

charcoal man in Panama  
fresh shined feet  
calypso in lapel
smellin’ of patchouli  
way he like to do  
lady in yellow dress  
pretty bauble  
sashayin’
her sassy self  

fais do-do
music drivin’
pumping la-la
dances her round    
like first time
lady shines  
steps fresh

charcoal man
smokes cigar
by the water
eyes strolling skirts

lady steps lively to another man’s dance
laughing
flaunting that yellow dress
snapping amber eyes
laugh showing milk teeth
bauble reflecting off water

black clouds paint themselves on sky
storm brews
takes her arm
  what you want
  yard dog
  make the misere
  bonne a rienne

charcoal man grab bauble
flings in water
for gators

lady says but you gone…

his eyes stop her breath
  don get siddity wid me
  make me pass you slap, yea
  tu peux voir le chemin et t’en aller  
  you can see the road
  go  

waves his arm at fais do-do  
   laissez les bon temps rouler

next dawning
lady’s white arm
sunrise bruise
bauble gone
cigar smoke gone
lady’s heart just won’t beat
right

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Neotec
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cool nice one : )
Sunshine
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2 posted 09-05-2006 06:32 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Fickle, fickle....

gander and goose stories...

Well done, Lady.

Dark Stranger
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lady one..he don't strike me as the type
to get the fury on..but she may be into spankin..enjoyed the snapshot ms
LeeJ
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well done
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Must just be the day...some aura in the air lingering over my heart, but Lady, I just don't want anymore "leaving". ahhhh  just a sad day in my world. Make them happy for a bit, you can do it...after all, you are THE Lady!
Robert Frazier
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my first read of the "charcoal man" . . .
made me smile because the charcoal man knows what she likes . . . clever dance of desire!  Am now looking for more charcoal!

Robert
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LadyKate~
You're publishing these, right ?????

Breathtaking with each new read~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

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Oh dear Lord Kate, you gotta turn this into a book.  These are absolutely outstanding,
and that man, what a rascal he is.  

Methinks, that lady, has him hooked!!
The Lady
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glad you enjoyed it
thank you Neotec…

yes, fickle
that’s what I thought too Karilea
thank you…

Stranger
I don’t think he would ever hurt
his lady
he was just a little irritated
left a good cigar to see to her
and that yard dog…

thank you LeeJ

Sandra…
your wish is my command
I will make them happy…  


Robert
I am glad you enjoyed them
thank you…


I had not considered it Marge
but I am now…
thank you  

he truly is a rascal Gentle Spirit
a rogue…
he loves the lady for sure
but will he ever settle down?
thank you

Sunshine
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It all depends
that settlin' down
for ther's sometin
abou roaming 'round

ask the bee
then ask the bull
somethin' of need
somethin' of pull

saw the bull
keepin' kind to cow
loss of bebe
wouldn't leave, no how

wrote the poem
long gone some then
eye the moment
knowin' when...

~*~

tanks, Ladie....

The Lady
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love it Karilea....
thank you!

Magicmystery
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12 posted 09-15-2006 12:07 AM       View Profile for Magicmystery   Email Magicmystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Magicmystery's Home Page   View IP for Magicmystery

So many I've read now..... and I am not sure if i missed any... WOW.... I will be collecting these up to read from one end to the other.... Like you're finished... NOT

Some one said they'd pay money for something as great as this story is... I tend to agree.... glad instead that its free.

Gotta go to bed now and try to unwrap myself from your web.  In an earlier life, she could have been me.... and he was definitely one of my X's

Can't wait to read more.

Sherry

    

The Lady
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thank you so much Sherry...
it's not over yet
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guess he didn't like anyone messin' with his lady or her showin' off her baubles in front of him maybe.  I knew he'd get her a bauble.

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