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Written Tears |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa 
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(Revised) As I tried to understand Draining thoughts poured to my hands So, I tried to write to you But my fingers froze Solid blue Right now, my mind It can’t think straight Its lines of thoughts Are figure eights And so, I tried to pass the time But sorrow stained These words in rhyme As the ice turned into rain With each touch I felt great pain Right now, my heart It makes no sound It went on strike And can’t be found Was it love That we both shared Or was it only That you cared For yourself Deep and true These written tears Now ask of you? "Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Or was it only That you cared For yourself Deep and true" good question JCP good poem ... |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Thank you, that was very kind. "Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself." |
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