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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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compression slowly pushing slowly pressing slowly noticing the marks left on my hands on my legs on my m-i-n-d disappearing a second skin covered in words I am shedding this life and starting anew no there is no water in my lungs no there is no string to bind me no there is no distance between my words I am connected I am collected I am here to finish what I started to breathe and not to forget to exhale _______________ It's been a couple months, and I'm not sure if you remember me. But I'm back, and I'm happy. And (hopefully) I am filled with words that I hope you will read once more. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I enjoyed this. You've put it together so nicely. Rae |
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Nikerlz Junior Member
since 2006-08-31
Posts 37California |
The poem is almost as beautiful as you are. Good to see you've returned. Have a wonderful day. BK |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: Is good to see you and read your words once more. Wonderful write ! :: bows :: |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OMG as soon as I saw your name I clicked. remember you? Lady, am glad to see you back!!! And no less, with such a stellar write. Very well done, and so very very happy to have the chance to read you again.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not sure if we remember you? It is WONDERFUL to see you back and in fine form! Home is where the heart is, and yours never left, little one.  |
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