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Rick
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0 posted 2006-09-04 07:13 AM


A notebook in my saddle bag
A road with change attire
A swag to lay upon the ground
No stress and my desire

The changing sound of creatures pass
The gums that share their cover
A day to call as company
The world just how I love her

To wander where the soul is free
From now until eternity
Taking notes along the way
To sleep at night, then greet each day



© Copyright 2006 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-09-04 07:40 AM



Walkabout well, m'friend.
And bring back some stories.




seraphin
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2 posted 2006-09-04 03:50 PM


*smile*
This is wonderful.

Sandra

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3 posted 2006-09-04 03:53 PM


Hi, Rick!

Yeppers! "The way day should be"!!!

Good to read you again! Hope you stay awhile this time!

Loving Light,

Linda

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4 posted 2006-09-05 02:22 AM


Your poem is so evocative of wide-open spaces and freedom--I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
Cheers,
Bill

RevengeIsMine
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5 posted 2006-09-05 02:27 AM


Hey Rick,
Great to hear from u again
Nice Work mate.

Rick
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6 posted 2006-09-05 08:18 AM


A big thank you to you all my friends, always wonderful to see you visit. Hope you are all well, take care till again.

Sincerely
Rick

LeeJ
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7 posted 2006-09-05 09:03 AM


Yippeee, this was like a walk with light, caring, only for love....to absorb all positive energy...

Good one Rick

Robert Frazier
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8 posted 2006-09-05 09:38 AM


"no stress and my desire"
yep, the perfect day!  enjoyed this much!

Robert

Rick
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9 posted 2006-09-06 09:09 AM


Dear Lee, nice to see you here my friend, you know the feeling, I can tell. Thanks for the reply, always good to see you visit.

Robert, thank you for your reply, good to have you visit, much appreciated.

To you both, thank you for the replies and
visits, be well and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

FNG
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10 posted 2006-09-08 11:13 PM


Yeah, that's a happy day indeed!

enjoyed.

Krawdad
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11 posted 2006-09-09 12:41 PM


Ah, to wander . . .
Who wouldn't?

iliana
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12 posted 2006-09-09 01:26 AM


This has such a happy feeling about it.  Much enjoyed!
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13 posted 2006-09-09 03:01 AM


I love seeing the world through your eyes.

Hugs for you ... aziza

Rick
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14 posted 2006-09-09 09:15 AM


FNG, thank you for your reply, it was a happy thought my friend while I walked in the bush and I did enjoy the moment.

Krawdad, we should all wander my friend, thank you for your reply, good to see you visit.

iliana, I was happy her my friend, it had been a good day, the thought and words made it better, good to see you here thank you.

I love seeing your replies aziza, thank you for replying today, I hope you are well and finding the fun side of life, for me it is just too busy and not enough time to do the things enjoyed. Hugs back

To you all my friends, great to see you all here, again thank you for your words and time, till again be well and take good care.

Sincerely
Rick

Neeraja
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15 posted 2006-09-10 03:08 AM


What a great poem to start my day with!  Thanks Rick!

Rick
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16 posted 2006-09-10 08:57 AM


Neeraja, nice to see you here my friend, thank you so much for the reply, have a lovely day and take care.

Sincerely
Rick

vandana
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17 posted 2006-09-10 11:51 AM


enjoyed
Rick
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18 posted 2006-09-14 05:02 PM


vandana, glad you could come and visit here my friend, thank you for your reply, as well enjoyed.

Sincerely
Rick

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