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Open Poetry #39
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Nikerlz
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since 2006-08-31
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California
0 posted 2006-09-04 12:28 PM

Ephemeral as air
Seasons seem to never care
For structure and the tingling celestial twitch run down your spine
Enlightenment doesnt mean you have all the answers all the time
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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
1 posted 2006-09-04 06:25 PM

Yep, it's settled, I really, really like your work.
This deserves more comments.
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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2 posted 2006-09-04 06:31 PM

I so admire your ability to say so much using so few extremely well chosen words.


   Rae
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