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Nikerlz
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since 2006-08-31
Posts 37
California
0 posted 2006-09-04 12:24 PM

Breaking up writting
And giving titles
The end of a work
Never revealing the endless rebirth
Of a period ending one piece at a time
Despite every connection
From time to time
Why put a period
On an endless mind?
Why put a period
At the end of a work?
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
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1 posted 2006-09-04 11:54 AM

Hmm, you've got me thinkin'

(note the lack of a period!) lol


EA
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-09-04 12:03 PM


Now that is why I leave
ellipses...



Thoughtful thinking!
exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
3 posted 2006-09-04 06:24 PM

Being a fan of rarely ever using periods, I loved this.
The flow is just wonderful.
I'll be watching for more of your work.
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
4 posted 2006-09-04 06:27 PM

If I don't use a period, I'd probably keep rambling on endlessly.


   Rae
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