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Nikerlz
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since 2006-08-31
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0 posted 2006-09-03 08:07 PM


Sorry this is so long, i greatly appreciate every one that takes the time to read it.  I started writting and couldnt stop.  Thank you for your time.


Each note connects to sing the song which rocks the race

We speak words inept language with disgrace

Each color connects to light the sky that paints the view

This visions for me and you

Each color defines this race

Always a reminder of disgrace

To sleep in a pillowed bed

Sultry wisdom in the head

I swear ill sing visions of a new

This songs kept for me and you



How do you choose words worth the power of depression

How can you place the line that defines losing a loved one

How can you write poetry about endless nights

And how can you define those delights,

Expressing emotion through words reality

Will never tell me where Ive been

Loss of quality has dropped too thin

Only a hint of lines of dreams of peace

This memories wearing thin

Counting on a languid whim

Words got me the wound

And can get me well

They have proven nothing to tell

I live my life in infantile curiosity

Theres no telling what ill be

Counting on a languid breeze

The wind has blown from thick to thin

Theres no telling where it ends

Please remember when you were born

Heros lurked in every invisible form

Imagination took light

Took life

Living of magic and miracle

Somewhere from now from then

This memory has worn too thin

Counting on a languid whim

Will never shown me where Ive been



Plants are living why cant you see

The slower consciousness

Divide a timeless cure

Plants are living

Knowing to grow

Growing to know

Is the ultimate consciousness

Happening so slow

You can barely see

For if one knew

The beggings end

Eternity

One would be nature itself

Dreaming a code impossible



Going back

Is everybody In

Or is nature wearing too thin?



Once the arts and tools of human expression had been developed

It lead to compulsion

By which I mean

Everyone is completely compulsive in nature

Animals of every kind

Reminders nature left behind

We do what we do

And it just does

Because

Whether you believe or not

God has addictions too

Just like me and you



Advent of language

And tools and art

Did nature accept a new compulsion

Being perfected for thousands of years

Has us hurdling to utter ignorance fears

Or

Loss of infinite

Identity

Becoming more and more

Product of self expression

Social compulsion

Mathematics and science

Answers of every kind

Symmetry

Reminders nature left behind



Because now and then

The world is set up in such a way

It seems

In order to live

One must buy into whats all around us

Without a hint of even knowing it

Without a hint of reflection

Were becoming

And coming to an age

Consuming

Well finally pay

Technology blinds us from the fact

Behind your eyes

Lies natures most complex form

Of this shard

Of time

Of glass

Broken infinitely fine

Id

Ego

Super ego

Fermented of infinite wine



Thought to think were gods

Food for thought

Blood meal

For the plant thats plowed



When it feels right

You always beg for a second twice

Because we were given the ability

To do whats right

Only making our way to the light

To use a gift

Conscious

Our place

Role

Right

Revolutions impossible fight

Denial

Constitution has lost its sight

Break on through

And leaving behind

Hell on earth

Is easy to find

Only trying to do whats right

Sometimes

Rhyme finds reason

Flight

Always beg for a second twice



Grant us one more hour to perform our art and perfect our lives

Separate

In fleet

Of the swarming wisdom of the streets





You arent a god until you die young

The only flaw youve ever known

Please end this crucified view

The difference seen

Through and through



Pure hearts come from any race

Any face

The strong thrive

The weak survive

Peace comes from any heart

Held its worth like an art

Slash of color

Bit of hate

This art comes from any fate

Watch me suffer

From intrinsic fear

Home is neither here nor near

Because you dont choose the home your born

Take your life and watch it form

The good die young

Through lifes infant song



Crude satyr

Bring me home

Where worlds innocent eyes

Take look upon childhood peace

Where emotions take full hand

Dont forget the innocent land

This world has more to offer

Blind with mystery

Childhood curiosity

Ignorance and strength

Imagination of length

Where reason stops nothing

From taking splendid flight

Invincible men and women

Herculean strength in disguise

Clark Kent

Two identities

Ones a lie

Created by suppression

Of lifes liberty nostalgia

For rhyme and reason

Dont let those seemingly elder lies

Blind us from the reasons why

The old think their wise

Better off

With Juvenile eyes



Form from rhythm

Chaos

Sensitivity to initial conditions

Never behold

Some things can never be told

Opposite from the things to teach

Thats why you should never preach



One man sees opportunity

The other sees freedom enterprise

A promise land

Bound by demise

A wrinkle of time

That takes shape in

Holographic memories present past

Soft smooth skin

Drawn by impenetrable kin

Music takes the place of linguistic birth

Upon the tremendous evolutionary pressures

Of spoken worth

Begging for communications instinctual

Syllable

Rhythm

A vision in the soft arroyos

Home and birth

Fetal position

Begging for linguistic right



Passage in jaws of time

The past is holographic in line

I guess

This memory will do just fine

Weve always been

Replaying lifes instinctual rhyme







I cant make sense of this coulded haze

I wish i could find brighter days

So instinct kicks in

And i run

Endurance

And it tells a story



The sound of beat

The sound of feet

Slapping rhythm

Constant pounding

Skeletal bone binding

To

Tissue pulse finding

Elegantly controlled homeostasis

Pounding feet

Hide and seek

A meek siloutte

Singing oxygen regret

Breathing

Slow

And

Controlled

In rhythm with a pounding fleet

Heart and chest thumping

Determination pumping

Nirvana bliss floating

Along the trampled history track

Doing it right wont take me back



When I first saw you

Indescribable feeling

Perfect hips and finger tips

But time has changed

And caressed its form

Stroke

Syllable beat

Born a world

Reflecting syllables meet

Born to speak

Your time is now

But I dont know how

To make a change

The only thing thats

Kept me from sane



Cut of throat

This boat rocks the race

Where rolling waves wont

Lap against a moon of tide

Stiff against her rocky pride

As if

The past weve met

Something impossible to forget



Shes a rolling stroke of art

Making her way to my heart

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