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Translated Beauty |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand 
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5671 Translated Beauty 03 September 2006 In your heart were words open to translate In your kindness was beauty to celebrate For you were the morning the night and the afternoon You were victory on a sunny day everything, the angel to light up a room To your heart those words of amour to your beauty, inside and out of adore These words that transpire into your name just to the looking into your eyes and proclaim A love beyond the stars a universe of internal discovery This place to rest a soul in everything in you was whole “There is no excellent beauty that hath not some strangeness in the proportion.” Sir Francis Bacon (1561 - 1626) English author and philosopher © 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet) a poet who cares Click for Another View |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"For you were the morning the night and the afternoon" ~ She sounds as though she was your 'everything' and you scribed both she and your feelings, well.  Loving Light, EA |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
This was one time, when a second opinion and that of your point of reference, Linda, has made a big different to my own appreciation of what I wrote Because I felt that I had let this poem down, but I now feel I was perhaps wrong to make such a judgement on myself a poet who cares |
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