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Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
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0 posted 2006-09-03 02:05 AM


Old I have become
Old do I feel
Looking down the ages past
Seeing love's lost
And dreams dying
Here I am at the end
And I feel its time
To grow from here
Leaving my sorrows
Behind
I will go beyond.

[This message has been edited by Neotec (09-05-2006 12:22 AM).]

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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
1 posted 2006-09-04 12:41 PM


Do step beyond The Old and find new mysteries. If old love's are lost find new. More faithful and lasting. Open the door and find a pasture of color filled LIFE.

Also just trying to help a little.
Spell check..dieing and beyound.
         s/b dying and beyond.

Hugs
BonBon

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
Posts 112

2 posted 2006-09-05 12:22 PM


Thanks Bon, thought never could spell worth a darn : )
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