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she feels better (charcoal man and his woman)

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The Lady
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0 posted 09-01-2006 06:23 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady




heart lifted
lady
easin’ up from bad day

charcoal man brings mudbugs
hot sauce
for red mouth
kisses back of neck
make  freesôns
lady laughs
chewing
    allons danser  
    ma cher

she slaps at him
tiny hand missing

charcoal man pulls her up

loblolly pines
spanish beard  
day lily
fat old ‘gator
witness
dancing silhouettes
faster
faster
wild bamboula

cotton skimpy flies across room

charcoal man knows
how to fix broken window
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Sunshine
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1 posted 09-01-2006 07:03 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Ahhhh...aha...



More.  Please.

The Lady
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2 posted 09-01-2006 09:26 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



thank you Karilea…
he’s such a rascal

seraphin
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Well, I feel better now.
The Lady
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4 posted 09-01-2006 11:56 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady

it was pretty touch and go
for a while Sandra...
but all is well again
he sure has his ways  
aziza
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5 posted 09-02-2006 12:41 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

:: Stands up and tosses a chair through her closed window ::

I have a broken window!

.....

:: Mutters .. I want that man! ::

Is that the sign of a good poem?
The Lady
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6 posted 09-02-2006 12:44 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


laughs out loud
I would hope it is aziza

thank you...

The Lady
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7 posted 09-02-2006 12:46 AM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


wonder why we want
these rogues so much?

he is a romantic cuss
but he makes it so hard for her...

playing.with.crayons
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Damn. a brain transplant perhaps? I want to walk through yours and pick the flowers.
lovely write!
love cheye
latearrival
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9 posted 09-02-2006 05:09 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

I have been enjoying all the Charcoal man stories. They are written as only you can write. thanks, martyjo
SmartChick
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Much enjoyed!
Earth Angel
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Hmmm! I thought it was only the good guys that were any fun! lol

Another fine addition to this captivating series!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda
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12 posted 09-02-2006 10:39 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

wonder why we want
these rogues so much?


Lord woman, if you ever find the answer to that question, PLEASE share it with us...
that would be giving the answer to a universal question!!

Well done lady, am enjoying this series so very much.  Hugs.
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He most certainly is a rascal...no doubt
about that.
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 09-02-2006 01:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lady
Reads like Randies brother. Enjoyed
*Alli4000*
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15 posted 09-02-2006 06:07 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

I enjoyed reading this.

~Alli~
divine chaos
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16 posted 09-02-2006 10:54 PM       View Profile for divine chaos   Email divine chaos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for divine chaos

Lady Lovely,
I adore this series
Quite the rascal, indeed
*grins*

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

1slick_lady
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i love this so much
you are very talented
i look foward to your every write
fanfanbigfan
Neotec
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nice read, having a hard time getting it out of my head now lol
JamesMichael
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19 posted 09-03-2006 08:40 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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a brain transplant might be the ticket cheye…
thank you

thank you martyjo
I’m glad you enjoy them…

thank you SmartChick

apparently those bad guys are irresistible  Linda
thank you…
hugs

oh Gentle Spirit
if I ever find the answer to that question
I will plaster it all over
these pages
thank you...

he certainly is Barry
thank you…

I think I heard a rumor
Sir Sy
that they are related…
thank you

thank you Alli…

thank you Sheli…
glad you enjoy them

Helen
thank you so much
for your kind reply

Neotec
just go with it… lol

thank you James…
as always
Dark Stranger
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lady one, ol cotton skimpy is good
on the porch nail
wavin at gator grin, enjoyed this ms
The Lady
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22 posted 09-05-2006 09:59 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


gator liked it Stranger
thank you...

JesusChristPose
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23 posted 09-06-2006 11:30 PM       View Profile for JesusChristPose   Email JesusChristPose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JesusChristPose

I enjoyed this poem.

For some reason, it reminded me of that movie Clint Eastwood starred in with Ms. Streep - The Bridges of Madison County.

I could be off on why, but it did.

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

The Lady
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24 posted 09-06-2006 11:32 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady

hmmm... I could see that JCP
good movie...
thank you

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