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she feels better (charcoal man and his woman)
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she feels better (charcoal man and his woman) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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heart lifted lady easin’ up from bad day charcoal man brings mudbugs hot sauce for red mouth kisses back of neck make freesôns lady laughs chewing allons danser ma cher she slaps at him tiny hand missing charcoal man pulls her up loblolly pines spanish beard day lily fat old ‘gator witness dancing silhouettes faster faster wild bamboula cotton skimpy flies across room charcoal man knows how to fix broken window |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahhhh...aha...  More. Please. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Karilea… he’s such a rascal  |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Well, I feel better now.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it was pretty touch and go for a while Sandra... but all is well again he sure has his ways  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Stands up and tosses a chair through her closed window :: I have a broken window! ..... :: Mutters .. I want that man! :: Is that the sign of a good poem? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
laughs out loud I would hope it is aziza thank you... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
wonder why we want these rogues so much? he is a romantic cuss but he makes it so hard for her... |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
Damn. a brain transplant perhaps? I want to walk through yours and pick the flowers. lovely write! love cheye |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I have been enjoying all the Charcoal man stories. They are written as only you can write. thanks, martyjo |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Much enjoyed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmmm! I thought it was only the good guys that were any fun! lol Another fine addition to this captivating series! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
wonder why we want these rogues so much? Lord woman, if you ever find the answer to that question, PLEASE share it with us... that would be giving the answer to a universal question!! Well done lady, am enjoying this series so very much. Hugs. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
He most certainly is a rascal...no doubt about that. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Reads like Randies brother. Enjoyed |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I enjoyed reading this. ~Alli~ |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Lady Lovely, I adore this series Quite the rascal, indeed *grins* ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i love this so much you are very talented i look foward to your every write fanfanbigfan |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
nice read, having a hard time getting it out of my head now lol |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a brain transplant might be the ticket cheye… thank you thank you martyjo I’m glad you enjoy them… thank you SmartChick apparently those bad guys are irresistible Linda thank you… hugs oh Gentle Spirit if I ever find the answer to that question I will plaster it all over these pages thank you... he certainly is Barry thank you… I think I heard a rumor Sir Sy that they are related… thank you thank you Alli… thank you Sheli… glad you enjoy them Helen thank you so much for your kind reply Neotec just go with it… lol thank you James… as always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one, ol cotton skimpy is good on the porch nail wavin at gator grin, enjoyed this ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gator liked it Stranger thank you... |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I enjoyed this poem. For some reason, it reminded me of that movie Clint Eastwood starred in with Ms. Streep - The Bridges of Madison County. I could be off on why, but it did. "Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself." |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
hmmm... I could see that JCP good movie... thank you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
grinning here charcoal man, he be busy slip o' cotton, she be even busier |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
smiling Kacy thank you... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Breaking my window did not work. Did I ever tell you that? But, I did laugh tonight. A |
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