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Dublin Boy
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0 posted 2006-09-01 05:12 PM


Ol' sky-wanderer,
bathing my cell walls with silver light,
I envy you

your lasting freedom
to ride the night-skies, unfettered.
How I rue

my stolen years,
confined in Folsom prison, doing time,
while you are free.

Ol' prison moon,
one day I'll join you in the sky,
where I long to be.


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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-09-01 06:18 PM




this one walked
all over me
making shivers, Bill...

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2 posted 2006-09-02 05:16 AM


And most of us reside in the prisons of our minds. good writing, martyjo
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3 posted 2006-09-02 10:11 AM


Good write!
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4 posted 2006-09-02 11:01 AM


I always enjoy a good lunar poem! ~ and this is one of them!

Shine on!

EA

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5 posted 2006-09-02 11:03 AM


Bill~



Bravo ... bravo !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2006-09-02 06:07 PM


Wonderful write!

~Alli~

Dublin Boy
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7 posted 2006-09-03 01:53 PM


Thank you all for your kind and encouraging comments--very much appreciated.
Cheers,
Bill

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