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Open Poetry #38
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FNG
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since 2006-02-07
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0 posted 2006-09-01 04:47 AM

Steel coffin bound.
Buried in silver coins.

Mouth stuffed.
Can't sound an upheavel.

Lay in peace.
Content with ease.
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2006-09-01 08:56 AM

yes, steel coffin bound
with richness a glow

very well done...looking at both sides of the coin.
FNG
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since 2006-02-07
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2 posted 2006-09-02 02:30 AM

Hi LeeJ,

you can read my mind.
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