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FNG
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Steel coffin bound.
Buried in silver coins.

Mouth stuffed.
Can't sound an upheavel.

Lay in peace.
Content with ease.

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yes, steel coffin bound
with richness a glow

very well done...looking at both sides of the coin.
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Hi LeeJ,

you can read my mind.
 
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