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It's once a happy family.
Union of parents and sons.
The father tried on adultery.
For some excitement and fun.

Mum was broken as the wedding oath.
She's going to leave this drone.
Bringing along her toddler sons.
Wiped all memories gone.

She'd taken all the clothes she had
Against the biting cold.
And in a note to him she wrote.
I've taken all your gold.
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FNG~
If poppa's gonna mine someone else's shaft ... he SHOULD get the shaft !!

I ADORE this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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"And in a note to him she wrote.
I've taken all your gold."

and well she should..
nicely done FNG
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hehe...thanks Marge and Lady for always reading me (good or bad),

That's my mama's story..A thing of the past.  

[This message has been edited by FNG (09-02-2006 02:52 AM).]

 
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