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Waking up

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FNG
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0 posted 09-01-2006 03:59 AM       View Profile for FNG   Email FNG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for FNG

A late awakening,
or an awakening came upon?

Breakfast in bed,
piping hot pancakes!

Added to undigested yester'late night snack,
no bother to added lard.

A reflection in the mirror,
a stranger's image would be strange.

Hair in a frenzy,
growing weed by weed in the garden.

Time to awake,
time to mend.
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1 posted 09-01-2006 10:08 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

... yaawwnnnnnnn ...
I love it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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Hmmm! I've had mornings like that ~ and it ain't pretty!

~ May your day be better than this morning's reflection!

Loving Light,
EA
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FNG
Reads good to me.
The Lady
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"Hair in a frenzy,
growing weed by weed in the garden"

yes
I love it!

FNG
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5 posted 09-02-2006 02:24 AM       View Profile for FNG   Email FNG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FNG

Interloper, Sir Seymour - glad that you find it pleasant to read.

Earth Angel - Actually, most of my mornings are like these. lolx

Lady - THanks for reading again and your kind comments.
 
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