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FNG
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0 posted 2006-09-01 03:59 AM


A late awakening,
or an awakening came upon?

Breakfast in bed,
piping hot pancakes!

Added to undigested yester'late night snack,
no bother to added lard.

A reflection in the mirror,
a stranger's image would be strange.

Hair in a frenzy,
growing weed by weed in the garden.

Time to awake,
time to mend.

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-09-01 10:08 AM


... yaawwnnnnnnn ...
I love it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-09-01 11:08 AM


Hmmm! I've had mornings like that ~ and it ain't pretty!

~ May your day be better than this morning's reflection!

Loving Light,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2006-09-01 11:29 AM


FNG
Reads good to me.

The Lady
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-09-01 06:04 PM




"Hair in a frenzy,
growing weed by weed in the garden"

yes
I love it!


FNG
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5 posted 2006-09-02 02:24 AM


Interloper, Sir Seymour - glad that you find it pleasant to read.

Earth Angel - Actually, most of my mornings are like these. lolx

Lady - THanks for reading again and your kind comments.

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