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miscellanea
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Proof in the pudding
Lasts only until its gone
New dessert beyond


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Now, this one raises an eyebrow or two...
Sheesh...I only have two...  Like the
thought.
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humm food is nice
: )
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Magnus and Neotec,

Oh, boy!  Maybe I should have thought this one out a bit more!  Believe it or not, it was one of my 'deeply contemplated, serious poems!' I can now see where it "might raise a few eyebrows!"  Anyway...
glad for the multiple interpretations.  That's the stuff that makes life interesting, eh?  Hm...perhaps inspiration for a humorous poem?  Yeah!

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::smiles::  
Excellent !  
:: bows ::
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miscellanea

I took it quite seriously
but I can see it's open to
interpretation

I like it

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This belongs on top

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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May all your puddings be 'just desserts'.


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mmmmm!  layered with meaning, and a sweet read.  Is this senryu?  I get it confused with haiku, but I love this form of poetry, succinct and full of impact.

Dessert, indeed!  Next on the menu, flambeau!  

hugs

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You are all so kind and very much appreciated.  Thank you.  As to what form, I don't usually adhere to form, but I think this is Senryu.  I believe Haiku deals with nature.  See you in #39.

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