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Marge Tindal
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  Night plays
      elongated
   in slip shadows
      of lacy shed
       fingertipping with light
  in bawdry colors
      drawing me nigh
  to sultry
   sigh~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -       noles1@totcon.com       

© Copyright 2006 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Marge/sis...I love it when you write this sultry feeling.  
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indeed sighs

Margie, this was great!!!!
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Even without your usual picture this is very colorful and beautiful.  Love, joyce
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Deep in the heart


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Did it just get warm in here or is my collar too tight

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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very clever not to mention seductive!
martyjo
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I am agreeing with those before me.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
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Beautiful Marge! You artistic talents are just beautiful.
Marge Tindal
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Thank you all sooooo much for seeming to totally enjoy your perceptions of this one~

The corker is that last evenings sun-in-set inspired this little piece of fluff~

As the light played across the back meadow she seemed to stretch her ink into these thoughts~

However ... I do realize that once *gifted*
the beauty is in the eyes of the beholder~

Thank you for beholding~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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I really like this Marge
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Beautifully penned little piece, Marge. Unusual format, but very effective.
Cheers,
Bill
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fantastic-ally penned!
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ah Marge
this is so nice
Florida weather can make you
feel positively sultry...
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I love the way this feels.....
very nice...!!

hugs, g

"Home..is for free expression, not for good impression..."

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Dear Marge,

Love the sultry, warm feeling.

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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When I read this a picture came to mind.
Lace curtains, moving slighty with the wind, and delicate shadows dancing upon the wall.

Loverly my friend
Hugs
BonBon
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