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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2006-08-31 08:43 AM



Black is the sky,
night stars twinkle,
vast is our universe.

Thousands of miles,
distance, space, time,
big is the earth.

Love is bigger, stronger,
reaches the farthest depths,
where naked eye cannot see.

Years may come and go,
our souls, know not time,
no shackles chain us.

Through the silence,
the stillness of night,
your souls cry I hear.

I listen, waiting,
for sometime, somewhere,
alone, your heart will never be.

I will find YOU...


© Copyright 2006 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-08-31 10:32 AM


So very beautiful, and so very nice to read you again.  Welcome back lady.
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-31 11:23 AM


GR8 write!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ctowen
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3 posted 2006-08-31 11:24 AM


As I read the words an underlining message came to me ....

"I will find you" ...

        ... will you?

always touching!

Ct

LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-08-31 11:58 AM


flowing deeply and softly
wonderful poem

Martie
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5 posted 2006-08-31 01:12 PM


I'm glad to see you...seems like it's been a long time since I read your romantic heart.
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2006-08-31 07:35 PM


RomanticHeart~
You *gift* us with such beauty~
Always happy to see you return 'home'~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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FNG
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7 posted 2006-09-01 05:04 AM


HE's calling out to you...

Find him!!

enjoyed.

sim0riah
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8 posted 2006-09-07 11:08 AM


ARH... So very well written. The feeling this conveys is very wonderful indeed. Great job!

Rich

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