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river of sighs
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river of sighs |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Stuffing voice into my ears constellations came knocking at my door you tipped my wonder off balance with flashes that could blind a deer your that someone behind pushing me skewing off balance I’m underwater In your ocean where I breathe means scent of stay-at-home skies herbs 4 life running around my heart your smile found it’s home on my face your that erotic out-of-body experience answering spiritual questions romance that tells the tale of a woman pulling me right past destiny where time goes back to find sustenance extinguishing dreams of torment dies within your body and soul paranormal fiery passion paints a whole new meaning sometimes a girl just needs to believe her heart lives deep in a far off time where some symphony strings her deepest most inner essence where her poetry turns into metaphysics that otherwise, might merge into secrets and there, in one surprise of afternoon you...you meet me in sun rise prayer gazing earnestly into my eyes where we become a river of sighs http://www.hallmark.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/pro duct|10001|10051|590514|-2;-102001;11446;-102034;92055||P0R34SO|null [This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-31-2006 09:16 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I couldn't say it better myself. Good morning sweet. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ What a morning BEAUTY to greet my eyes !!!! 'you tipped my wonder off balance' You did ... you did~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
"Sigh's" Hi there Lady Jane. Hugs BonBon  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! Just .......... WOW! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Your tastefully chosen words delighted my every tastebud, Lee. Rae |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ....each word a poem onto itself. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
As Interloper said... WOW ! I am always awed by your way with words. They either bring forth a sigh or take my breath away. ::smiles:: Sweet Imagination has become very fond of you. :: bows :: |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow !! eyes glowing and sighs flowing Hope |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ok, I just gotta ask ... just whom are just asking for a date? -OR- who is supposed to ask you for a date? Inquiring poets want to know  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
NOOOOOO !!! Knowing cannot be as enjoyable as pretending that its ME. ::wiggles eyebrows:: Now...shhhhhh hush hush |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"sometimes a girl just needs to believe her heart lives deep in a far off time where some symphony strings her deepest most inner essence" That she does, LeeJ! Loved this write - love all your writes! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! this is beautiful. |
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