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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-08-31 07:50 AM


I Passed

Some how I passed the prism white
Into the glories colored light
Walking rainbows jeweled with dew
Into horizons endless view

With all my other senses lit
To play upon a cane of wit
To fix those fragile entities
To stay my phantoms fantasies

It was a moment of delight
With endless stars that lit the night
With galaxies of pinwheel new
All of which came into view

A wonder that implodes my mind
The wonder of true white to blind
The open of a door of sight
An instant of beyond the light

It is an instant nothing more
But is a glimpse into the core


© Copyright 2006 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
JosephF
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1 posted 2006-08-31 07:53 AM


Wow, that was Beautiful, really really Inspiring. (Claps)
LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-08-31 07:54 AM


whew, your in wonderful form this morn
this was so pretty, absolutely beautiful

morning Sy

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-08-31 11:09 AM


Well done!
Toerag passed a kidney stone

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-08-31 12:19 PM


I signed on early
just to read you in the morning Sir Sy
I was going to say you are a wonderful way
to start the day
but it all seems sort of anticlimactic
in light of Toerag's kidney stone...

laughing...

Martie
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5 posted 2006-08-31 12:49 PM


Sy

there is no end only filigree of silk
blooming then a melting prism
encompassing of perfect quilt


Sunshine
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6 posted 2006-08-31 01:37 PM



And I saw you wave...

Excellent writing as always, Sy!






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7 posted 2006-08-31 02:29 PM


Filagree - yes that is what this was, pure filagree of thought and emotion, loved it!  Here I thinking by the title you passed a kidney stone Mornin folks.
Klassy Lassy
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8 posted 2006-08-31 03:46 PM


...and so I'm pulled into your true colors.  They dance smiles and misty rainbows, off these pages into sparkling reflections!  Lovely prisms!  

~ K ~

Honeybunch
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9 posted 2006-08-31 04:14 PM


"It is an instant nothing more
But is a glimpse into the core"

And never to be forgotten!  Hmm?  Perhaps like a kidney stone for those unfortunate enough to have experienced one.  All that aside, a lovely write!


  

Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2006-08-31 04:56 PM


Ah, my friend, I have never seen that light, except in your words.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

SmartChick
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11 posted 2006-08-31 07:26 PM


Oh Seymour, this is just so beautiful. As always.
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2006-08-31 07:45 PM


JosephF
Thank you for the warm comment.

LeeJ
Almost as pretty as you.

Interloper
Passeda few in my day, very painful.

Lady
Your reads ae always special to me.

Martie
And that is the Martie way.

Sunshine
You know I

Mysteria
You surely are one of a kind.

Klassy
Always a Klassy answer, thank you.

Honeybunch
For a lovely person.

Pilgrimage
LOL well that's one way. Thank you

SmartChick
Perhaps, but not as lovely as you. Thank you

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