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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-08-31 07:39 AM


down ol gravel yard
to the rowdy gin
three kitty drove her shivie'
to get her dancin' done

she stole the black jack's brim
put pretty stink' fingers
on his dark stick cuban
then kissy mouth mentioned

she was better flavo'd
than some hempy smoke tube
but some fancy dance first
to get her in the mood

she did her cotton nasty low
then hem highed her hungry
got her skin shimmer showin' sin
to make ol black jack young again

then took him down, back room drinkin'
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daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-31-2006 10:16 AM).]

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-08-31 11:36 AM



Stranger
this three kitty lady  
that did her cotton nasty low  
just amazing
so is the poem  
  
dark stick cuban  
mercy...
hot in here

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-08-31 11:49 AM


ladyone, thanks for steppin in..hope the stogie smoke don't water your eyes...too much.
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