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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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0 posted 2006-08-31 05:22 AM


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Beau Lieu {Beautiful Place}

30 August 2006


For there was a place in your heart
such a “beautiful place” to be
This loving place, the place to see
If only blindness did not
stand upon centre stage

For then the truth would be open
as to a door more than ajar
So wrong, yet so right
so wonderful, yet so kind

Opposition and frustration
that quest by name
Where the last was first
and there was no lasting shame

Beautiful place, beautiful heart
where there was heaven and earth apart
So who created love, that feeling of amour
because in your heart was this
beautiful place to adore


“But many that are first shall be last; and the last
shall be first. So the last shall be first, and the
first last: for many be called, but few chosen.”
Matthew 19: 30; 20: 16 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares



© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-31 08:41 AM


lovely words, feelings, and poetry
poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
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2 posted 2006-08-31 08:09 PM


Thank you for your kind comments

when I am sorry that I am not an avid poetry reader and do not always have the time to express my feelings of others who like share their writing here in these forums

yet in saying that I know all comments and feedback of my own writing influence my continued forms of inspiration and willingness to share my own art forms

a poet who cares

Dublin Boy
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since 2006-08-26
Posts 102
UK
3 posted 2006-09-01 11:06 AM


Excellent poem, written with genuine feeling.
I greatly enjoyed reading this.
Regards,
Bill

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-09-01 11:15 AM


Your heart is a "Beau Lieu" and you express it so poetically.

Loving Light,
EA

poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
5 posted 2006-09-01 04:23 PM


Beaulieu happens to be the last name of a woman in Canada, that several of my other poems posted in this thread relate too

Thank you for your kindness to my words

a poet who cares

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