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stations of her cross (charcoal man and his lady)
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stations of her cross (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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lady wanders airless house walking stations of her cross adoration adoration adoration despair Papa warned me smell of calypso smooth of brown hand despair soft of lips adoration despair sound of voice oh god prie mère sainte peu de fleur release me tells her chapelet crying knees cotton skimpy catches her neck pulls garrotes she yanks sails it across room lady prosterné |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Poor Lady. He is in her head -- and snaking through her body. She can't lose him, can she. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one...missin frenzy is a good skin makes the touchy arms hurry back soon enjoyed this view ms |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful!!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Almost makes me wish I spoke French  A gem! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
he’s driving her mad aziza but I don’t think she will lose him he keeps coming back the snake... there is something to be said for missing the one you love Stranger but I'm not sure what it is... thank you thank you LeeJ Interloper almost makes me wish I spoke French too says she prayed to the Blessed Virgin the little flower St. Theresa prayed the Rosary and prostrated herself poor little thing... |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
In anguish...she pleads for Heaven to bring back the Devil. ::smiles:: gotta love it ! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
parfois nous prions le plus dur pour ces choses non bonnes pour nous But that certainly would not apply to our Charcoal man, now would it |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Afterthought here. One of my favorite quotes by St. Theresa: More tears are shed over prayers answered than those gone unanswered. so true. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Yes exactly Uriah what an enigma… thank you so right Sandra but she doesn’t know he is not good for her such is love… afterthought… thank you for the quote Sandra… I love the saint of “Little Ways” and her sweet wisdom |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
The comments to this poetic series are wonderful. We all loved them. A |
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