Well I'm glad? everyone likes it -- but, um.. it isn't moi... if I ever pick it up again it would be to arrange for someone else... maybe -- unless I can think of something but, I'm not likely to spend any more time on it.
Yeah Martie -- like I said... I've been in black holes before -- so I know how it feels - but I was really using this as a metaphor for something else right now that's frustrating the crap out of me too...
Nan.. I understand perhaps not liking worst and worse -- it was originally worst and worst... um.. but, I don't understand your solution either -- because it's a dillema between two bad things -- is it worse that something happened to her? or is it worse if she's fine and just rejects me? (of course that's the protagonist's question not knowing.. myself knowing that the former trumps the latter for fact)
any other idears? any and all suggestions always welcome...
blazey -- sometimes a wall is just a wall... is just a wall... I'll keep marching and blowing.. but mostly blowing.