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Neotec
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0 posted 2006-08-30 09:15 PM


Down ages
Apart they come
Living lives
Drawn to each
Not knowing why

Coming togather
Over and over
Back and forth
Throught the ages

Fighting each
Loving each

Making misstakes
Braking hearts

Not knowing
To just
Love each other


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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-08-30 09:37 PM



weaving in and out
through this life and that

good work Neotec...


Neotec
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2 posted 2006-08-30 09:39 PM


Thank you my Lady. ( loving smiles even thought I'm sad )
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with you
3 posted 2006-08-30 09:43 PM


"Coming togather
Over and over
Back and forth
Throught the ages"

yes...I like this

Neotec
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4 posted 2006-08-30 09:45 PM


Thank you Sea : ) wishing a lost love would read : (
XOx Uriah xOX
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5 posted 2006-08-30 10:42 PM


::smiles::    Nice!  Very nice!  Well done!
It emits a glow...that warmed me.  Thank you

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2006-08-30 10:59 PM


Love is not lost
For it follows its own path
Destined as the sea to the shore

Most beautiful poem.
TD

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2006-08-31 11:05 AM


gr8 write

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Neotec
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8 posted 2006-08-31 09:44 PM


Thank you all : (

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