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wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2006-08-30 07:36 PM


Asked for a card
celebrity hour
waited in corner
agent ignores
just brushed aside
not part of the rowdy
didn't matter
male artist leaves name
in the hands
of beautiful lady
pretends to listen
to throw you off
intent on younger crowds
the spin off
more noise
the merrier
boom boom
waited for card
but then if the artist
has to be signed on
who cares
one can catch
smaller fish
boom boom
without agents


[This message has been edited by wordwizard (08-30-2006 10:49 PM).]

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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2006-08-30 08:30 PM



Martin,

I even saw a dance floor.

Well done!


Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
Posts 112

2 posted 2006-08-30 09:27 PM


woow, could see the lady and agent, and the dance floor in it.: )
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