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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were windows with oceans behind my mind wrote poems in the sand below your look through places I wore the dawning tide for your eyes with long shirt jaunty pretending some buccaneers composure our bows nudged drift wood edges the splintery pricking was our passion where we impaled our panting raftless we writhed our tethers plowing dream seams with anchored ends assundering with sub aqueous fingers til fantasy gorged our famished gasps _____________ daark |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
"you were windows with oceans behind my mind wrote poems in the sand below your look through places" My favourite here.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend fng..thank you so much |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The windows bring such beautiful images. Much enjoyed the sights today D. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you were windows with oceans behind my mind wrote poems in the sand below your look through places" "I wore the dawning tide for your eyes" "til fantasy gorged our famished gasps " goooooooood grief mister.... loved this  ‘I want to swim away |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are fantastical and do windows very well... lovely drawings, too. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks window lady ______________ ms suesea I enjoy when you call me myster thanks hon ________________ ms sun, thank yor for walking by |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
1,000 thoughts 1,000 images yet, wordless |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra, only 1000? we must work on that (grin) thanks lady |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS....so many windows in your poetry...to see in, to see out...to see through..all of those.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks little neighbor...yes I do love the sea of glass |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
As I said once before, you are a Word-Weaver. A magical Word-Weaver whose poetry entrances me. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
goddess of oatmeal, you bless me, thanks lady |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"til fantasy gorged our famished gasps" lovely Stranger... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one, thank you for snacking by |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
sky words spoken by a restless sea... oh yeah, anchors can be a good thing! Beautiful poem, Daark |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, thanks lady friend |
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