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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-08-30 04:45 AM


Moving On


Myself and a mutual friend were discussing Suzie,
the woman that went away, and my friend told me
that on the female side, no one had heard from
her since she went away.
I told her that it was the same for me.
Then my friend surprised me a little bit,
and ask me if I loved her.
So I told my friend yes, and then she ask
me if Suzie loved me, and I told her no, I
didn't believe so, because if she did,
she couldn't have left me.
And then I told my friend my latest theory
concerning Suzie, that she was a woman with
a destination, and Honolulu was just a stop
on her journey, and when the time came for
her to move on, she did.
I was thinking a little later, it was time
for me to move on too,  and I didn't.

"Perhaps its possible to love someone,
and not desire them to be so close,
to love them from afar.  Yes, of course
it is.  All things are possible."

JamesLee
27August
2006



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1 posted 2006-08-30 08:49 AM


enjoyed your ponderings here James...
LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-08-30 09:06 AM


yes, of course it is...all love is not a forever love in the physical, but in the spiritual form....you will always and forever have fond memories of her...and will grow from that love....it's inevidable...

wonderful write

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-08-30 11:27 AM


"all things are possible"
I love it!
Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2006-08-30 11:34 AM


You said so much with such clarity and I think perhaps you are right.

aziza

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