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lady waking (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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sun nudges eyes
lady yawns
stretches
smiles a memory
sweet food
sweet man
searches sheets with toes

une attrappe de poule
gone

tiptoes  
with morning sun
room to room
sound of gone

where his Panama hung
empty nail

charcoal man
drinking café au lait
from another cup
eating sugar from another bowl
not one crumb left
for the lady

only enough madelines
for one night

lady
pleure

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seraphin
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1 posted 08-29-2006 11:10 PM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

Elle ne doit pas pleurer ! Il est un homme, et est pour toujours seulement tant que son attention est distraite.

He will be back, won't he Lady!
Martie
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Lady...I've done that reach with the toe...such details make for great writing!!
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ah yes, Sandra
that's the way men are
attentions as long as
well... you know

yes, I'm afraid
he'll be back
The Lady
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thank you Martie
there are probably
a lot of toe searchers here...
sigh
lonely feeling
aziza
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He should watch where he gets his sugar from ... might get that social disease, the sweet tooth.

Yep.

aziza
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got me laughing
aziza...
I think he's already
got it

that was good

aziza
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:: just mutters about dippin' his fingers in other's sugar bowls ::
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laughing loud now...
remind you of someone
does he?


aziza
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:: Laughs ::

Do I get to plead the 5th?
Let's just say ...
He was sucking sugar ... and ...
well, you know the rest of the story.

:: laughs ::

So ...
I love this Charcoal Man cause He appeals to me -- but, he ain't drinkin' café au lait out of my teacup.
The Lady
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um hum aziza
well known story...

keep an eye on your cups
he's pretty sneaky

laughing!

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Yes, details...

empty nail...

little images like that
make for some fine vignettes...

and give an endearing quality
to the loving rogue...



well done.

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I love the way you bring him back to us, more, more please.  The lady, is so very blessed!
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lady one...pssst he always takes his cohiba's on the veranda...
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You have made this man sound so adorably cute....

I almost fell in love lol
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How I look forward to these treasures

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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thank you Karilea
empty nails are the
hallmark of this rogue

Gentle Spirit
thank you so much

Stranger
hes’ takin’ his
cohiba on some other veranda...
this morning
the rogue…

no no FNG!
don’t fall in love with him
well maybe just a little

why thank you
Interloper

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


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Okay, I am older and wiser.  Maybe he can drink  café au lait from my cup.  Once.


Or twice.

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