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Interloper

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-29 01:05 PM

I Remember New Orleans
When It Rains, the
sleep depravation while
Looking Toward The Light in
The Maze of
Jasmine.  You can
Blame it on Interloper,
he brought her something, a
dragon’s dowry,
A Worthy Dream of
Heartsmiles.
If I think
Into The Mourning of
Tomboy Desires I will
keep breathing….
Nothing To Fear in
My Cradle Ship while wondering
What About Love?  I display
A Disfigured Smile and wonder
Where Is God, is faith
submerged?
The Answer, given in
Echoing Memories, is
That’s What Brings Me Back To You,
Heavenly Angel
If Heaven …
Accepted,
Peace.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-29 01:08 PM

challenge well met...and then some

bravo!!!!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-08-29 01:32 PM

smiling HUGE here and loving this!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2006-08-29 01:48 PM

whoa...fantastic!!

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2006-08-29 01:49 PM

Oh, Well done, Interloper, and by your own words we can "blame Interloper"!

It's been fun - thanks!

Take care
Helen

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-08-29 01:51 PM

Ah, good...now the both of you should Duet!

Well done, and thank you!

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

6 posted 2006-08-29 05:36 PM

you and Honeybunch are a good team. Fun writing and reading. martyjo

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2006-08-29 06:14 PM

Hey, Doctor, I concur with our Sun's suggestion! You and our Honey should du-et together!

EA

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-08-29 10:54 PM

Bravo! I agree... a duet!

nakdthoughts
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Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2006-08-30 06:51 AM

Fun writings...

M

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