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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Jasmine The earth has breath night blooming so fair her night turns light within Through the heat of day she has waited the changing then finds some sleep drenched man half undone wanting The light of air so sweetly seeds discovery no moon will despair the grace one gives another She appears with her shiver true and topples the fence and the window screen following the sheets in rumpled sleep to a dream I dream of you With her instinct made from purity she knows that distance is man made and so she magic melts both time and place making together lift the longing with just one breath |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Martie hon, sometimes those dreams are so beautiful, so sweet, and we would just love them to last for hours, and hours yes?? I love this Martie, so good to see you writing.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
OOOOOOOOOOOOH, I love this! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She has the effect, and you have the way.  Still beaming? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sheeer poetry! ~ at its finest! You are a gifted poetess and thank you for sharing your gift with your fellow pipsters!  With Love & Floral Essences, Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
With her instinct made from purity she knows that distance is man made and so she magic melts both time and place making together lift the longing with just one breath Martie, your the gem of song...this was magic! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ You are simply word-fragrant ... sweet, sweet, sweet~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
she knows that distance is man made and so she magic melts both time and place making together lift the longing with just one breath How very lovely! *S* I need that dream! *S* |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You are a sure inspiration... and a wonderful read. |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
Woow, just woow : ) |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
This is just so lovely!!! I'm glad I didn't miss it. Sandra |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
that a man be fortunate enough dear friend.. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and so she magic melts both time and place making together lift the longing with just one breath" wow that was a beautiful breath Martie |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well - I just get drawn deeper and deeper - just great Martie |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I've tried before, to capture the essence of this flower with my words....and failed. Here, you bring it real with a wave of your hand. As with any poem of course, and almost any flower, there's more here than scent...there are traces of every kind, and they are good. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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