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A Disfigured Smile
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A Disfigured Smile |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
A Disfigured Smile You point and stare yes i know your there i may not look like you but i hurt all the same being born this way im not to blame to suffer in silence is no mans wish do you honestly think that i like looking like this wanting a friend or loves first kiss but when you look at me you flinch in fear a disfigured face balding hair dont judge me by my looks alone get to know my heart im more then skin and bone I laugh I dance I sing I sigh but mostly at nights I lay and cry please give me chance see past my face give me your hand that saving grace then you'll see im a beautiful soul then you'll be happy and I will be whole Written by Lisey |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
The want of us all. To be loved. This is very well done and emotively written. Peace. And welcome to passions. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
Ty!!!  ) |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Deeper than any skin I know .... Larry is quite right, everyone wants to be loved not for loves sake but for who we are and how we are seen .... a great write, thanks for the look! Ct |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are already whole, and writing, too! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
That is the way of the world. Hoping that man will see beyond the flawed beauty of self. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. To some a person may be ugly, but to another they have the rays of the sun held within their loving eyes. Many look deep below the outer skin and see the beauty inside. Hugs BonBon aka Bonnie J.  |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Excellent and very moving piece of writing,Lisey--who can fail to respond to this? Regards, Bill |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
aww wow thanks  |
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