Said In Anger...Said In Tears...

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Open Poetry #38

Said In Anger...Said In Tears...

gheber
Junior Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 23
Milwaukee, WI

0 posted 2006-08-29 01:06 AM

She Said In Anger...
It seems I don't know where to start
To tell you of my broken heart
Been this way for many weeks
Never seems my turn to speak
When I do it's never right
My words just make you want to fight
You used to like my company
Now you just see wrong in me
Got to change what you don't like
Can't even question if you're right
Won the fight and lost my friend
But broken hearts can always mend

I Said In Tears...
I can't imagine where you'd start
To tell me of your "broken" heart
While day by day, and week by week
Your deeds undo the words you speak
It's because that's wrong that you're not right
'Til you accept that, we must fight
A snake was my best company
Until the day the snake bit ME
Did something I will NEVER like
Decided not to treat me right
But TRUTH in time might someday mend
A heart that died with my best friend

© 2006 Gerry E. Heber, All Rights Reserved

When we are unable to find tranquility within ourselves, it is useless to seek it elsewhere.
-- Francois de La Rochefoucauld

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-08-29 12:01 PM

Gerry~
You don't *gift* us often ... but with a gem like this ... it's just enough~

'Your deeds undo the words you speak'

Oh ... SO much truth in this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-08-29 12:07 PM

Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-08-29 12:34 PM

heartbreakingly passionate....

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

4 posted 2006-08-31 02:56 AM

this is so beautifully and skilfully written. really free flowing and impassioned. I wondered though, why you italicized the last word on every line?
anyway, lovely write.

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