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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-28 05:34 PM



Honeybunch met a
Dublin Boy who was a
Gentle Spirit called
Mistletoe Angel.   He was a
Balladeer who wore a
Toerag and hailed from
Uriah in the land of
Tindal.  They were driving in their
Riaz when
seraphin stopped at
Seymour Tabin for the night and met
The Lady, or I should say,
1slick_lady, who traveled with a
Dark Stranger by name of
Lisey who shed a
crimson tear because
Dragon Mistress scared
aziza
shirtless by introducing her to
JamesMichael.   This upset
ballajosue who ran for
pen&paper with
HopeS of writing under the
midnitesun, never in the
Sunshine (having a
Neotec lighting device).
Troy thought this was funny ‘till he walked into
jwebs and is now known as
Professor Gloom who sits all day long
playing with crayons with
Jenn Cirrincione while
Martie oversees their artistry.
Elizabeth Santos called to
Rick and
Kalandria as they passed by in their
RMW which was chauffeured by
LarryC on the interstate
Shawn105 enroute to
Foxyoasis to see
ThisDiamond embellish
Earth Angel with a
Magnus of
artexeres.  Of course
Ericc thought that was a disease and
Klassy Lassy agreed to disagree when a
SilentShadow passed over them.  It seems that
Lighthousebob was having
nakdthoughts on a
Pilgrimage to
Abiola and it was affecting everyone, even
SEA who is generally placid.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2006-08-28 06:24 PM


placid?? me?

this was fun to read... I enjoy these so much. Thanks for including me, even if I was last


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-08-28 06:31 PM


left me smiling~~~


M

seraphin
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3 posted 2006-08-28 06:32 PM


You are incredible!
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2006-08-28 06:36 PM


Loper~
REMARKABLE !

Um, this 'may' be the most ink you've used on these pages of blue~

*Huglets*
~*LandOfTindal*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com       

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2006-08-28 06:46 PM


cute
Martie
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California
6 posted 2006-08-28 07:46 PM


Love it, Loper!!
The Lady
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The Southwest
7 posted 2006-08-28 10:04 PM



terrific!


Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2006-08-28 11:32 PM


you have been very busy
immersing poets
into your fantasy
enjoyed this ride

gheber
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9 posted 2006-08-29 01:31 AM


Impressively witty and RESPECTABLY clever...WOW!

G

When we are unable to find tranquility within ourselves, it is useless to seek it elsewhere.
       -- Francois de La Rochefoucauld

Honeybunch
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10 posted 2006-08-29 02:22 AM


This is great!  Thanks for the smile this morning!
Larry C
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11 posted 2006-08-29 03:39 AM


Yup, you're good and you're fun. And just so you know I drive a cruiser. But I'll like passengers so it works. What a hoot. Well done. And thanks for including me.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

latearrival
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12 posted 2006-08-29 03:45 AM


And latearrival,late as usual, hopped a ride with her eldest son Larry to say, "I agree". Too much fun and you wrote it well. martyjo
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
13 posted 2006-08-29 07:34 AM


You and Honeybunch ought to duet!  She, the titles, you, the names...

Well done, m'friend.




Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2006-08-29 08:37 AM


smiling here, I love these.
Dublin Boy
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15 posted 2006-08-29 10:09 AM


Very likeable, amusing and creative, Interloper--I thoroughly enjoyed this, even though I don't know anyone as yet.
Cheers,
Bill

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
16 posted 2006-08-29 11:57 AM


Doctor, you are a Love!

This was very cleverly contrived ~ and a highly amusing read!

Of course, my favourite lines were:
"ThisDiamond embellish
Earth Angel with a
Magnus of
artexeres."

~ Hmm! Sounds like a plan! lol

Have a great day!

EA

Balladeer
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17 posted 2006-08-29 01:41 PM


I don't wear a toerag.....I just  wear him out!

fun write, 'loper

(you have WAY too much time on your hands!!)

LeeJ
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18 posted 2006-08-29 03:17 PM


this was so much fun....enjoyed
suthern
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Louisiana
19 posted 2006-08-30 01:51 PM


*sniff* Left in the dust again. *G*

But I enjoyed the tale! *S* (and they'll be saddlesore LOL)

Pilgrimage
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Texas, USA
20 posted 2006-08-30 03:40 PM


You made me chuckle with this one.

You nut.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Neotec
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21 posted 2006-08-30 09:50 PM


WOOW, Nice i like much.  : ) just WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
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