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about eyes (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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0 posted 08-27-2006 11:05 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady


        ah bébé
        you know your man
        loves you

lady passes him pair of eyes
boude'
tired of shoofly ways

        ah bébé
        tooloulou

can’t get him out of her eyes
crave tendrils
reach for his wrists
his cigar smoke mouth

        beb
        river don care
        'bout we make roux

lady’s mouth makes red o
eyes hold his
fingers scratch dark loam
on her way to
lost again

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
seraphin
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1 posted 08-27-2006 11:44 PM       View Profile for seraphin   Email seraphin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seraphin

Is it too much to ask that you hurry on the next installment?
The Lady
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2 posted 08-27-2006 11:51 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady



laughing
the next installment is ready
Sandra...

aziza
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3 posted 08-28-2006 12:09 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

:: Just whispers .. look away!  look away!  Do NOT look into his eyes! ---- ooooh, too late.  Maybe next time (but don't look in his eyes). ::

Oh man - I have so been down this road.
The Lady
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aziza
we are sisters of the heart...
you, me and the lady
I want to tell her
not to look too...
poor thing

aziza
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5 posted 08-28-2006 01:23 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

It's like being a 'push me - pull me' -- and whisper ... Look!  Don't Look!  Look!  Noooooooooo ... laughs.
The Lady
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making me laugh
aziza...
that's exactly what it's like

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Listening to every heart


7 posted 08-28-2006 06:20 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Your vignettes are magical, Lady...
and the naughty is delicious...

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8 posted 08-28-2006 07:28 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Oh this lands so softly just right this morning, yessss I know this type of don't look....

niiicccceee lady.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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9 posted 08-28-2006 07:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

lady one..go ahead and look...he would be wearing raybanz anyway...the mirror kind...so she could see her own reflection, doing her smile miles..enjoyed it ms
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Deep in the heart


10 posted 08-28-2006 12:44 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

I
LOVE
IT!

More!
and MORE!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Martie
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Lady....You charm with such sensual earthiness...it pleases me much to read.
The Lady
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ah, Karilea  
the naughty drives me to write them
thank you…

Gentle Spirit
you know that
type of don't look
too…
another sister
thank you

Stranger
you are incorrigible
but nice…
thank you

I thank you
Interloper
yes, more…

it pleases me that
you read
Martie…
thank you

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


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I told here not to look.  But, did she listen?  Nope.  She did not.

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