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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
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0 posted 2006-08-27 02:43 AM


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The Eh in the Bee Cee

27 August 2006


Was she - one, two, three
as Eh, Bee as Cee
Her beauty, a kind smile
those words of elegant choice
Her heart, her hand, her lips to kiss
unto those moments in life to rejoice

A painted smile of sacrifice
beauty scanned from the sun
Just to look into her eyes
and know, she was the one

But only, yes there had to be
that imperfect moment, not perfect as such
Not that she was in the Netherlands or even Dutch
Words of sacrifice, words dedicated in her name
Carolyn and the archer, this Cupid to aim

The Eh, in the Bee, Cee
the one in the twenty three
The South African diamond from Canadian soil
oh to have those riches, the riches of oil
When in her eyes there was more to be told
nevertheless, there was age, beauty
and a distance to encounter from days of old


“And he said unto me, It is done. I am Alpha and Omega,
the beginning and the end. I will give unto him that is athirst
of the fountain of the water of life freely. I am Alpha and
Omega, the beginning and the end, the first and the last.”
Revelation 21: 6; 22: 13 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares


© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
1 posted 2006-08-27 03:10 AM


Interesting write. I like how you incorporate scripture "I am alpha and omega the beginning and the ending" into it. As it refers to God and the beginning and the ending of the earth.  very enjoyable and provokes thought.


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