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Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
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0 posted 2006-08-26 04:39 PM


Crying out at night
A name of saddness
A name of love lost
Crying when awake
Tearing at the soul
Missing the one love
Of all the ones to love
The one that is missed
Is the only one
For whom to cry for
Soul tearing out
Looking for the other soul
Two souls apart in the night
Looking for each other
One in pain
One in a prison
One looking for the other
One looking to be found
Both out crying for the other
Crying out at night

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Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
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since 2006-07-04
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germany
1 posted 2006-08-26 04:55 PM


Very emoitional piece, I enjoyed reading it.
I think every one has been in this place before. nicley put into form.

Everyday I see a sunrise is a blessing, Every night I see the moon rise is a miracle.

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
Posts 112

2 posted 2006-08-26 06:56 PM


Thank you

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