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Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2006-08-26 02:04 PM

My brain racking the echoes
Of the chaos in the surrounds
Trying to focus on something
Anything of my own design
Volumes of intensity
Of noise and of things
Trying, desperate to seperate
Measures of everything
What to discard, what to grasp
Everything threatening to collapse
Faces and figures in color
Crying out to make them steady
Clamboring towards the swirls
To portray their truths throughout
Hearts hold treasure
Minds would in doubt, destroy
Eyes glancing towards the blue
Suddenly tears fall sureender
To the great one knowing above
(To believe that everything beautiful is reachable in the faith of the possiblilites of all tomorrows)

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-08-26 02:34 PM

Bridgette~

'(To believe that everything beautiful is reachable in the faith of the possiblilites of all tomorrows)'

When I first read this, I thought that it said 'that everything beautiful is ' RECHARGEABLE ... and then I realized that indeed it is~

Have a reachable and rechargeable *HUGLET* my friend~
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

2 posted 2006-08-26 04:31 PM

Away down a hole
As black as night
NO stars a shining

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-08-28 10:32 AM

"Suddenly tears fall sureender
To the great one knowing above
(To believe that everything beautiful is reachable in the faith of the possiblilites of all tomorrows)"

I loved this most of all.
I would like permission to use part of this in one of my works, please

P.S. I would have capitalized "Great One."

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2006-08-28 10:55 AM

njoyed the view here ms

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2006-08-28 12:14 PM

"What to discard, what to grasp"

~ That line brought to mind what my Mom used to say, "When in doubt, throw it out!"

Interesting and compelling read!

Loving Light
Linda

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