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Neotec
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0 posted 2006-08-26 06:24 AM


Times gone by
Love is lost
Lives are short
Times gone by
Sadness is here
Happyness is lost
Times gone by
Alone at night
Sadness hits hard
Times gone by
Seeing in a dream
Dreaming of seeing
Times gone by
That one love
The best love
Times gone by
The souls are one
Apart they are sad
Times gone by
Giving all that he has
Knowing it isn't enought
Times gone by
Not knowing
The right words to say
Times gone by
Slowly dieing
In the night
Times gone by
Looking in to shadows
Shadows of the heart
Times gone by
Another life
Maybe souls meet anew
Times gone by
Soulless in the night

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1 posted 2006-08-26 10:50 AM


such a sad write...

"Times gone by
That one love
The best love
Times gone by
The souls are one
Apart they are sad"

I liked this part best...


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2 posted 2006-08-26 02:06 PM


Alwayz hold on to your inner truths.  Beautiful and very sad.

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


Neotec
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3 posted 2006-08-26 06:53 PM


Thank you all
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