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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
inaccessible you are just beyond my grasp infuriating Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I'm so sorry to infuriate you, Doctor Love. But I'm committed to another! lol   EA |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's what destroys me that you are just out of reach yet here...in my heart  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Earth Angel ` Ok, If'n I hafta  SEA ~ I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy to hear from you! Where have you been, gal? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Persistent Aloft just near exactly Yet not completely Some stunning lines you weave. Enjoy your craftsmanship |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Whoops! Butter fingers. That taffy has to be good for somethin'!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
ThisDiamond ~ persistance my name never say die no never fully committed Klassy Lassy ~ lofty goal attained then I let you slip away butterfingered me Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I am properly humbled!  BTW, you are very good at American haiku |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Klassy Lassy ~ ... and I thought it was American Senryu. Shows what I know Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (angel friendship hugs) Oh Doctor Love, I can understand ever so much the sweet madness of this sort of unrequited love where you feel ever so strongly for someone, but that person is already taken, and you respect ever so much the decision and heart of that someone but still perplex images from reality and wonder what could have been! (sad sigh) God Bless You, dearest friend, this is a wonderfully heartfelt write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
It probably is... I truly don't know proper format for anything other than traditional haiku...Nature, right? 5-7-5 usually. If this is senryu, I love it! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
great job infuriated me too... |
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