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A Worthy Dream
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A Worthy Dream |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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…a worthy dream what words… but, what of these words? A nurturing mother comes into life Not quite knowing she will welcome, then gladly Suckle, future generations. An engineer is born, as Legos become his game of life. Drifters are born, wafting From position to job to position, Finding themselves, even while fulfilling needs Of those that require, With dreams remaining in want. Pilots seek, Heavens… Swimmers find depth…. Our dancers, sprung from energy, The architect, sculpted from precision, Archeologists dig themselves out from the past. The dreamers, ah, Well, they, thank God, they Watch stars, still. Musicians, oh so natural in song, And painters…oh, they come knowing Turpentine is their bloodline. A worthy dream…who does not dream? But these three words caught and were held in a Will of wisp, singular blaze Of insight… And that is when I thought of you, The poet… Who embraces Such passion In ink, blood-red, All that would be dust, If not scribed, Then become this poet who prays, schemes, designs, Comports, and seizes on to just this, Their very own Worthy dream. Leave a memory behind you, Leave life with Insight Fulfillment Environment Love Intuition Nurturing Genealogy Energy Rhythm Instincts, a Natural Glow Think…. What makes you…. Then...leave behind a piece Of you, A worthy dream. ~*~ A poem for our new members...who are following a very worthy dream...Thank you, for allowing all of us, to be a part of your lives. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
that lingering life the worthy dream left behind the essence of you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, poetess extraordinaire, Thy poetry is oh, so fair. Your pen works magic o'er the page, With mots so fine ~ forever sage.  Love & Sun Light, EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
amazing Karilea... makes me think lingers yet... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Karilea, Wonderfully sculpted thought and poem and one that is so true! I agree. Amazing poem! "How many Sunshine poems do I have stashed in my library now?" I wonder! Thank you for this... cathy [This message has been edited by miscellanea (08-26-2006 09:06 AM).] |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
what a amazing poem |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
And along the way perhaps we find the words that discover who we are. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I needed a little sunshine this morning and what did I get? Insight! Thanks. Wonderful poetry.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....What a grand design it is, to know within...direction, path, the ever after of it all...and the writer can mark the path with pen and heart from back to start.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So many dreamers doing beauiful things. Dreams inspire us to greatness. We share ourselves, our hearts, our lives. Beautiful, definately one of my favorites of yours. HUGS, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Great write, Karilea - makes me put my thinking cap on. |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
If not a man A women i would have been A mother rather then a Father Children are the best |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, How lovely. I think I'll chosse to ride the coat tails of the "newbies" and steel a few of these precious thoughts for myself. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
and I just say -- Thank you. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You are so insightful. I am a dreamer. Still dreaming. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sun, you wrote of those things that make us who we are, the gives us the air that we breath and the strength and courage to jump... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh Karilea this is just what I needed today... though my daughter sits beside me now I am still a bit lost and lonely and in need of a dream. This is a very touching poem and I would print it out but the printer int he library isn't working so I will just add it to my private library Kansas is nice ...but I think I may change my mind when the snow comes LOL miss reading you but hopefully will catch up soon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooops...I forgot the library button got it now  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*applause* indeed, a worthy dream MommaK...follow your dreams, I always say. *w* Never, ever give them up. HUGS and yeppers, a  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I had a dream once and again now and again I mean ...and now but a thousand times a dream in times and places just now I mean and again, and now and will again a thousand times a dream in times and places I thought it came true once thought it would again once and now ~~J |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
"In the beginning was the Word..." It seems so fitting that it leaves essences of creativity in us and of us for posterity. Your poems take me deep into words, deeper into insight and thoughtfulness, and I'm glad for the essences of you left in each piece. They are beautiful! This poem certainly blooms!  ~ Klassy |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Excellent thoughts, beautiful writing.Thank you for being the poet you were meant to be.. martyjo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd I LOVE this!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Enter your passion, Make it mine But keep it yours, and strong. Remember the pain And the ecstasy~ Convey them to me with your Embrace. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
nicely put and nicely colored in the light |
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