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meetmyworld
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0 posted 2006-08-25 02:53 AM


You see how you're untouchable?
i'm hoping i can break it.
not, necessarily physically, but by breaking through your emotional barrier.

it's too thick and i can't seem to see past the intentions,
intentions that don't break so well, intentions that are too deep to tell, whether or not you're hiding the truth.
or whether or not it's just the beginning of the root, that's buried deep inside your thoughts
whether or not you think that you're the one that brought,
all of this,

this...this hating of what you are.
but believe me man,

other people brought this gift to you.
the worst gift that could've been brought to you.
the gift of being untouchable,
or better yet unbreakable.
harder than the Da Vinci code
which secrets had a truth untold.
your truth is that you are an angel
even though you don't live life, straight through your parents manual.

you're untouchable, unbreakable.
i hope you find that you are able,
to open up to, if even to only one person,
your thoughts and mind.
i call them mine.
mine to take and mine to break,
whether false or even fake!
they're mine.

find out whom i'm talking to,
even though this me is you.
( my thoughts of me)


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