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seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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0 posted 2006-08-25 12:41 PM


Appease my mind
let thoughts rest deep
in placid waters
of quiescent sleep
burgeoning dark
like dawns fog creep
over fair skin bared
in nights ocean deep
feather tip fingers
float and seek
shoulder of strength
to lay soft cheek
breaths rise and fall
draws body to pique
awakening eyes
so recently meek
blushing as dawn
through drawn shades peek
mind now awake
thoughts lively and deep.



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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-08-25 01:23 AM



lovely Sandra...

did I mention I like
your work?

Magnus
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2 posted 2006-08-26 08:31 AM


Nicely composed...an enjoyable moment in
the waters...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-08-26 08:35 AM


seraphin
As lovely as a flowers face.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-08-26 11:05 AM


Sandra~
There is always a piece of soft beauty in your thoughts~

'feather tip fingers
float and seek
shoulder of strength
to lay soft cheek'


This is just one that I greatly enjoyed~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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