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storm song (charcoal man and his lady)

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The Lady
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The Southwest


0 posted 08-22-2006 10:54 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Lady


mais
lady pretending boude'
get him to rag her out of it
make nice to her

charcoal man takes her
in jon boat
rain crow hollerin’
say it’s fixin’ to rain
sky tells a different story

lady lazes  
cotton skimpy
hair sweated
silk fan
red blue
slow

hot
lady whimpers
charcoal man fills Panama
bathes bebette
  ca c’est bon
  ain?

cotton skimpy sticks
lady shows freesôns
tries hard
but giggle comes
out mouth

charcoal man
cooks up little storm song
in jon boat  
makes lady nice  

bird still jawing away

[This message has been edited by The Lady (08-22-2006 11:41 PM).]

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 08-23-2006 08:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

lady one...summtin bout the cotton stickywetjoi...like gauze on glazz....got sounds to make one close their eyezz

enjoyed this bird's eye view
Gentle Spirit
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oh yes, am so enjoying this series.  
LeeJ
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SE PA


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me to, more, more, please

excellent write
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Deep in the heart


4 posted 08-23-2006 10:48 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine
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Standing in line...

The Lady
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don’t close your eyezz
Stranger…
There may be more
cotton stickywetjoi
ain?

thank you Gentle Spirit
it writes itself...

thank you LeeJ
I don’t think
they’re finished yet

well, thank you
Doctor Love

thank you Karilea
for everything...

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


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I keep thinking that I am going to stop reading for the night and come back tomorrow, but a little voice keeps whining, "oh just one more please".  So, I give in to that little voice and move to the next chapter.

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