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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-22 05:00 PM

poetry like prayer
should be rated on its strength
never on its length

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-08-22 05:05 PM

One heart, one question
Listen now for answers, shhhh
They come stealthily

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2006-08-22 05:05 PM

For sure!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-08-22 05:13 PM

Sunshine ~
two hearts one message
quietly as on cat's paws
the answer revealed
yet only these hearts will know
sharing one with the other

Magnus ~
Thanx for the read, my friend

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-08-22 05:24 PM

Magnitude, and time
Resolutions find some peace
All to be, in mind

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2006-08-22 05:34 PM

Sunshine ~
consequential age
declarations achieve calm
thoughts need attention

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2006-08-22 05:45 PM

Softly whispering
Angels sing a lullaby
Slumber comes quietly

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2006-08-22 06:05 PM

~GRIN~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2006-08-22 06:24 PM

Magnus~
quietly welcomed
softly crooning slumber song
the sandman cometh

ThisDiamond ~

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2006-08-22 06:29 PM

~Prayer, like poetry,
Should be gifted everyday
So no day goes by
that you don't hold another
in moments of sincere prayer~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2006-08-22 10:20 PM

and so it is said,
quality, not quantity,
makes a poet gleam.

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

11 posted 2006-08-23 02:39 AM

Length is over rated!
And you meant poetry?
Where was my mind at?

aziza

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2006-08-23 07:23 PM

I think its all good...still I admire someone that can say a lot with few words...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

13 posted 2006-08-23 07:29 PM

yep
and in such short space
a myriad of thoughts come
enveloping love

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

14 posted 2006-08-23 07:53 PM

Yes.

Eric

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