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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2006-08-22 05:18 AM


in the sand
a grasp
holds ethereality
frequently testing bare-thin dimensions
of an I

hands tied to retrospection
hypothetically new,
color-blinded by the resurrection
in a waste of pain.

the scars of mirrors
hidden
in symmetrical resonance
is
intelligence strangled to desperate emotions,  
when green is dying red.

before the rime
awareness cries for warmth,
definitely confused.


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Gaia
1 posted 2006-08-24 10:06 AM


Petre, this is a wonderfully deep layered write, emotionally and intellectually. It's one I shall enjoy placing in my library, to read again. Thanks for sharing.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-08-24 10:10 AM


With each read, I appreciate your words more!

Loving Light,
EA

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-08-24 10:11 AM


you and I seem to be on the same plain this morning, although, you say so much with so few words, and well, then there's me...

excellent!

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
4 posted 2006-08-24 10:57 AM


thank you all
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