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cover of pain
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cover of pain |
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droppinginsideout Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 54TENN |
You see that little girl? yes the one with tatoos. she doesnt look too young, but her body is covered in abuse. with every stroke of the needle she's induring less pain than the story that she's telling of her life stuck in the rain. from beginning to end the needle paints her life on top, but at the end of this all the pain down inside will be the only pain she's got. every picture is a statement and every word is her hope, thats with her, till the end of this, till her determination goes for broke. so dont call it artwork because its nothing near the same. its her story of a lifetime and her constant cover of pain. ~Jamison~ "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such a tragic waste of what could be the art, the unique personality that could have been...covered forever, I'm afraid. You've painted this one well, poet. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This aches. This truly, truly aches. You have painted a picture that is far too common. So sad. Such a waste. Such a shame. Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
You have really caught a meaning of skinart in these words. Yes, there is pain here, and I can understand that when there is pain, one needs to find an outlet. You caught my attention and held it with this one. Very well done! Don't care what people say |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You opened my eyes and made me a bit more aware. Thank you. aziza |
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