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themute
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0 posted 2006-08-22 12:38 PM



The words are tripping on themselves as they come to me
Will this ever end or do I need a conscious ending of the quickness
I am too liquefied and need a cooling or an isolation of thoughts
Perhaps I’m wrong and what is needed is an expansion  
Either way this diary written so ignorantly of my self
Will not satisfy unless it unleashes my mind of its own blocking
The senses that in copious tangents flood my minds senses
Memories and feelings that arise spontaneously
And with every moment of these phenomena I became more open
My words could flow like so many waters do as though on a slope
And instantaneous the messages are in such words to me
But now those words are so far away and so locked behind doors
That I am angry and I am searching for a way to become one
To know the words so well that we can be integrated
And if I can I will be happy and sad again
Happy because I can see into my creativity and vision
Sad because I will then have thoughts that rush out without concentration  
Without consideration, without control
But at least they wont be tripping on themselves anymore  

I am the two-toed wanderer

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1 posted 2006-08-22 01:05 AM


It seems to be a curse and a blessing both, the way those words flow; sometimes a gentle stream, sometimes a raging river filled with rapids. I enjoyed reading this overflow.
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