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Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

0 posted 2006-08-22 12:36 PM

Stars Lost in obscurity
Vanishing
Lost in the darkness unknow
Gone forever
In the darkness
Disappearing
Vanishing without a trace
Clouds of gas and matter left to the whims
Of space.
Moving
Glowing in a circle without no end
Downward spiraling
Always going in
Vanishing like the stars
Never to be seen
Forever gone
Seemingly endless
Without a beginning
Without an end
Never to be seen by the eye
Stars in the sea
Surrounding the void
Shinng within the sea of darkness
Like lost leaves shining throught the
Morning dew
Gone
Like islands in the sea of darkness
Waves breaking on the shore
Tearing them down from molecules and atoms
That their made of
Forever rendering
Forever tearing them down
Where no lights shine
Stars goeth
To somewhere else
Without the shining
Of their birthright
Of their happiness to glow
their freedom to glow
red mad
Or yellow of mellow
Or the blue of the bluest saphire
Sad
Or the brownest of dirt
Or the white of clouds
None of the shining
In the darkness
Until reaching the end
Where this darkness becomes brighter
Then brighter
Brighness brighter
Shining throught the darkness
Bursting forth
Like the brith of a baby.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-08-22 09:12 AM

wow, you paint a very vivid picture with your words

Welcome to Pip!

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but don’t know how
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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-08-22 09:16 AM

Welcome to PIP and what an entrance
enjoyed floating along your words

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-08-22 11:16 AM

Welcome to the blue pages

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-08-22 11:54 AM

NeoTec~
Welcome and thank you for the star shower flow of your thoughts~

'Stars goeth
To somewhere else
Without the shining
Of their birthright'

I LIKE this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

5 posted 2006-08-22 09:27 PM

You'r all welcome. hoping i touch people out there with my words.

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