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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2006-08-18 12:55 PM

I Am Shadow

You bring me sorrow
wrapped in bright colors
and caresses.

You bring me loneliness
like warm hands
on bare skin.

But when she calls,
you disappear ~

a mist in the desert.

She is your sunshine

and I am

shadow.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-08-18 01:46 PM

Ah Nan...

poignant misery...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-08-18 02:00 PM

Nan~
This is a most poignant render~
A graciously penned emote~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2006-08-18 02:06 PM

Sigh.

The contrasts in your poem really tugs on one's heartstrings.

Very well written.

-Bob

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

4 posted 2006-08-18 02:07 PM

I didn't understand the contrast until I read further down...but yes, I have lived as this shadow......good write

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

5 posted 2006-08-18 03:46 PM

Actions that would bring shame in the light, are boldly performed in the shadow.

Ah  But the shadow allows and conceals.

Is there love for the shadow?   Or...is it the excitement of its secrecy that is so drawing?

Does one run to the shadow...for love of the shadow?  Or...for what is allowed in its embrace?
Pardon my pondering and rambling.
Wonderful write!!!

deasomnians
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 87
California

6 posted 2006-08-18 05:32 PM

Sorrowful without being sappy, this is a powerfully honest write, and I love it.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

7 posted 2006-08-18 10:57 PM

I like this.

aziza

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2006-08-19 03:22 PM

Here, a hug, free..with no strings...

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

9 posted 2006-08-21 04:45 AM

so wistful and longing and SAD.
but in the best way.
what a lovely write. xx

farewell the ash-tray girl

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

10 posted 2006-08-21 09:42 AM

Well said! Enjoyed the read!

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